‘Heavy Downpour’ Incorrect

Expression by Ebere Wabara

“BUT local and foreign investors…developed gold feet to the exercise after the Federal Government shifted the privatization of PHCN from March 2012 to October 2012.” Conscience, Nurtured by Truth: cold feet

“Decampees (Defectors) give APGA absolute majority in Anambra Assembly”

The last entry from Rutam House: “…merging of agencies performing same (the same) or overlapping functions….”

Vanguard of July 5 donated two blunders to the pool: “LUTH graduates 308 medical students” THE GUARDIAN of July 5 also committed the same solecism: would the hospital have graduated journalism students? This way: LUTH graduates 308 (students, of course)!

“Anambra House swears-in (swears in) five PDP legislators”

“Participants have been getting (coming) to grips with things like….”

“Delta’s anti-kidnap head arrested over (for) alleged role in abductions” (THE GUARDIAN, May 5) 

“Late Ekiti NULGE boss buried amid tears” (Leadership, April 18) DAILY INDEPENDENT also carried a similar foolish headline! Would he have been buried alive? Just drop ‘late’!

Vanguard of July 3 circulated five blunders: “We are glad that the police has (have) recognized terrorism as a menace that calls for special training of its (their) officers.”

“Care must be taken, however, to ensure that the need for specialized training on terrorism for officers and men of the security agencies are (is) not turned into avenue (an avenue) to line up (for lining up) the pockets of top officials of the agencies.” The most critical aspect of the foregoing extract: Care must be taken, however, to ensure that the need for…is (not are)…. 

Let us visit Vanguard of July 9: “The state, therefore, does not deserve the treatment being currently meted to it”.  Fixed expression: meted out to it. And this: ‘being’ and ‘currently’ cannot co-function.

 “Chief of Naval Staff advocates for increased productivity via industrialization” What a wordy head! When used as a verb, ‘advocate’ does not admit ‘for’.  Let us economize words, especially in headline casting: Naval Chief advocates increased productivity. The ‘industrialization’ aspect should form part of the story—every component cannot be contained in the headline, which just serves as a compass in navigating the newspaper.

 “For the university to recommend that students should pay for the damages while they have.…” A recurring error: except in legalese, ‘damage’ cannot be pluralized. (DAILY INDEPENDENT Online, July 9) 

“… rather than investigating and finding out who were involved and check against future re-occurrence: Beyond recurrence (not reoccurrence), can an event yet to take place happen in the past? 

“…the university is pointing its accusing fingers in the direction of the lecturers.” Correct expression: point a/the finger. 

 “…the AU summiteers concentrated almost exclusive (sic) on the political independence and liberation of countries in the continent.” (Daily Trust, July 8) In the interest of African Unity: on the continent.

“Monday’s action, which started at dawn, was as a result of the breakdown of series of negotiations…” An agendum: a series of.

“According to the source, the institution has a very high percentage of failure in the last academic year.”  Reported speech: the institution had (not has). 

“…that the authorities of the institution was (were) still waiting the result of the police analysis of the bomb.”

 “…in the next three years, its per capital income would have….” This way: per capita income.

THE GUARDIAN of July 6 disseminated dozens of blunders: “The home of the chairman…was vandalized and most of his properties littered outside.” No chaos: most of his property.  

“So how come that (why is it that) Mr…. who was vehemently criticized by our sports writers during his coaching days with our Super Eagles has now warmed his way into the hearts of these same people…”   In the spirit of sportsmanship and lexical sanity, let us replace ‘warmed’ with ‘wormed’. 

THISDAY of July 9 embarrassingly went down with copious blunders: “But experts have pointed that the inflation rate….” Contextually, the phrasal verb that applies here is ‘pointed out’… and not just the verb ‘pointed’ which means another thing entirely. 

“In his six-page address paying glowing tribute (tributes) and homage to former electoral boss late XYZ….” The late XYZ….

“Nigeria Breweries Poise for Better Future Performance” The Alcoholic beverage firm is poised (not poise) for….

“Despite the Moslem-Moslem ticket which he and his vice-presidential candidate held, majority of Christians across the country still rallied in their favour.”  No protest in the build-up to the next general elections coming up in 2027: a majority of Christians.

“In fact, nobody needs to go far in our contemporary world to find such helplessly troubled spots because they abound everywhere, in virtually all parts of the globe.” Morphology in turmoil: trouble spots, please.

“The eventual failure of many of such drugs have not discouraged fresh attempts at inventing more effective ones.” The battle against discord continues: The failure…of drugs has (not have).

“The heavy downpour most of last year has made the price of perishable commodities in the market to come down due to low patronage by consumers.”  ‘Downpour’ does not require amplification (heavy) because of inherence.  And ‘patronage’ is usually by consumers or their proxies.  So, ‘by consumers’ is otiose.

This next paragraph is repeated because of the persistent committal of the blunder. This column will not address it again.

“Of all the first generation (a hyphen, please) universities, OAU is arguably the one that was able to preserve its known ideology for the longest.” I do not agree with the usage of ‘arguably’ by a majority of Nigerian writers. The explanation I got from one of the country’s frontline editors recently was not convincing: when you have points to justify your claims, it becomes arguable and when there are no justifications, you employ ‘unarguably.’ If you are sure of your statement, make it declarative by jettisoning ‘arguably.’ And if you are unsure, do not make claims. If you do, be ready to argue it elsewhere when confronted (not in your contribution). For the avoidance of doubt, ‘arguable’ (adjective) and its adverb (arguably) mean: “…for which good, if not necessarily convincing, reasons may be found/open to doubt/not certainly, but reasonably held to be.”  (Source: THE NEW LEXICON WEBSTER’S DICTIONARY OF THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE, 2021) My grouse about this illogical excerpt is the intrinsic and quite avoidable element of doubt.